I have read the article "why TV is bad for us" and I want to express my opinion on it.
TV really makes people lazy. When a person watches TV, he becomes very passive. Sometimes people spend in front of TV most of their time. We are lazy to go outside and just breathe fresh air. When we watch TV, we don't use our brain at all. The fact is that TV doesn't very often stage intellectual shows. Also violence is brightly expressed on TV. But the law tries to fight against it. Censorship and restriction of age is established.
In my opinion, TV influences people badly. Instead of the active recreation, which is good for health, people choose passive and useless rest.
2) But I hope to master (я бы сказала to improve - но Ваше право оставить как у Вас) it because it will be (в будущем же!) useful to me in the future.
3) I enjoy learning, but I get tired after classes (после занятий!), and I feel (я бы сказала have a headache - устойчивое выражение) a headache.
4) And the last thing I would like to tell you about things I hope to achieve in my life, they (иначе предложение потерялось) are: to finish (Вы же дальше везде пишете инфинитив) the University, to have a very successful career, to build the home of my dreams and to find someone in my life to share all that with.
Хорошая работа!