Question

Вспомните правило урока об оформлении личного письма.
1 Найдите 10 ошибок в письме (правописание, грамматика, структура письма).
Напишите правильный вариант письма.
2nd March
England, London
Dear Berth, thank you for your letter. Sorry I haven't written for you before, as I'm up to my
neck in business.
Actually, I'm in need of pocket money like you and like you I'm crazy about computers. So,
last month I started repairing my neighbors computers. They told their neighbors about that and
so forth. Now I go to different people's houses on my bike to help them with any problems they
have. This week I've already fixed 5 computers and the people seem happy to my service. At
least I haven't had any complaints yet.
Anyway, enough about me. How you about?
Now I have to stop writing, because my mobile is ringing. Maybe, somebody needs my help
in the computer!
Hope to hear from you soon. Best wishes,
Nick
2 Выберите из двух вариантов неформальный стиль личного письма.
Dear (1) Kate / Mrs. Smith,
Thank you for your letter. I'm really looking forward to coming to Canada. Well, (2) you
asked me to tell you/ requested a few things about myself, so (3) please see below/ here goes!
I'm tall, blonde, have green eyes. Like all models I'm a little bit (4)
underweight/skinny. Anyway, (5) I've popped in a snap of me/I have enclosed a
photograph, so that you can see for yourself.
The good news is that we both have the same hobby. I am (6) fond of/crazy about modern
theatre. Shall we (7) purchase tickets/buy some tickets and go together to a new play when I
come?
There are a lot of other things I am (8) anxious/dying to do when I get to your place. I've never
tried fishing and boating, so perhaps you can teach me.
Well, I'd better finish now and get this in the post.
Hope to hear from you soon.
(9) Best wishes/Sincerely yours,
Jane

Answer 1

1.

 2nd March

England, London                        

Dear Berth,

      Thank you for your letter. Sorry I haven't written to you before, as I'm up to my  neck in business.

      Actually, I'm in need of pocket money like you and like you I'm crazy about computers. So,  last month I started repairing my neighbors' computers.  Now I go to different people's houses on my bike to help them with any problems they  have. This week I've already fixed 5 computers and the people seem to be happy to my service. At  least, I haven't had any complaints yet. They told their neighbors about that and  so forth.

     Anyway, enough about me. What about you ?

      Now I have to stop writing, because my mobile is ringing. Maybe, somebody needs my help  with the computer!

      Hope to hear from you soon.

                 Best wishes,

                 Nick

2.

1. Dear Kate,

2. asked me to tell you

3. here goes!

4. skinny.

5. popped in a snap of me

6. crazy about

7. buy some tickets

8. dying

9. Sincerely yours,

Объяснение: В первом задании я сделал перестановки, которые также считаются как исправление ошибок. Грамматические ошибки исправлены жирным текстом