Ну во -первых, a short palm tree with bananas . Вторе предл я бы вообще по-другому построила бы- a monkey was sitting on the palm tree and was chatting with a crocodile. Дальше вообще не понятно,но ,наверное ,лучше так- 3 предл i went up to the tree and said hello to the monkey. Then I asked what was the monkeys name. The crocodile answered that his name was Genna and the monkey's name was lily. I said that my name is Jill and that i was very glade to meet them. В Последнем предложении вообще не понятно,что вы пытались сказать.
1. travelled
2. won
3. have never visited
4. came
5. has met
6. have lived