1) Hi, Schmits family! - неверное приветствие. Во-первых, можно написать The Schmits и будет понятно, что Вы обратились ко всем членам семьи. Во-вторых, судя по всему это Ваше первое письмо, значит, нельзя сказать "Привет!", скажите по-другому: Hello! Good day и т.д. 2) The street is now sunny and warm, despite the fact that it was autumn. - Хорошее предложение, но "улицы не могут быть солнечными и теплыми". Очевидно, Вы хотели сказать НА УЛИЦЕ It is warm and sunny in the street now, despite the fact that it was autumn. Или скажите, что ПОГОДА The weather is warm and sunny in the street now, despite the fact that it was autumn.
It is spring now. Usually we HAVE good weather in spring, but sometimes it RAINS. It is raining now too. I don't like such weather, I LIKE when it is sunny. My parents aren't at home now. They are working. They WORK five days a week. My younger brother IS PLAYING chess with his friend at the moment. He often PLAYS chess after school when it rains. I'm doing my lessons in English. I AM WRITING a very difficult exercise. I'm also listening to music. I ALWAYS LiSTEN to music when I do my home task in English. Our pet Bobby IS PLAYING with a ball. He likes playing with a ball. I often TAKE him for a walk. My brother feeds him three times a day. The birds ARE SINGING merrily outside though it is raining. The sun ISN'T SHINING.
ответ: я незнаю :3
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