. 12 Check your writing. Can you say YES to the
questions?
Are the topics from Exercise 9 in your email?
Are there questions and sentences addressing
the reader?
Are there good things and bad things?
Are the spelling and punctuation correct?
Do you need to write a second draft?
Eminem is the one of the most famous rappers in the world. His fanbase is huge and passionate.
His real name is Marshall Mathers but in some songs he calls himself Slim Shady (it's his alter-ego) or Eminem.
I respect him for extremely great contribution to the music. The way he raps and rhymes is breathtaking. For example, in one of his songs called "Rap God" he says 110 words per 16 seconds. That's really incredible!
Moreover, he acted as a lead actor in iconic film, "8 mile". As Eminem says, it's semi-biopic. Exactly as the main character, he's grown up in bad neighborhood of Detroit and was forced to survive surrounded by afro-amercans. The only way to gain their respect was rap. There his story starts.
In conclusion, I want to say that, in spite of all evil Eminem met, he became one of the greatest rappers in music history, and I really appreciate what he has done. It's hard to not admire his will and self-confidence.
Надеюсь, я угодила юному Стэну. Было бы неплохо, если бы ты добавил(а) что-нибудь от себя. Если ты правда восхищаешься им, то, я уверена, что ты сможешь добавить свои чувства и эмоции. Удачи!