Question

Исправте ошибки. spain is a beautiful country with very interesting people. one of the biggest attractions is its cuisine of spain - one of the best in the world for the quality and variety of products. their language is recognized as a second official language of the world . the spanish people are very friendly, open , friendly and polite , so they are happy to welcome all tourists. to all the tourists they are treated like friends with a friendly smile on his face. most of the population - catholics . their people are very good at sports, such as football and tennis, but also in culture, they are not far behind . the spanish great music , folk dances , bullfights . most of the spaniards spend free time on the street. spanish people are quite dark . they also observe and family traditions are very fond of children and pets. i liked the spanish people of their peace-loving and a good attitude . i would like to visit their homeland.

Answer 1

The Spanish great music
are great in ( with)
 Spanish people of their peace-loving
because of

Answer 2

Ошибки: повторение friendly (are very friendly, open , friendly and polite)
я бы сказала Most of the population are Catholics.
The Spanish (может быть have?) great music
 on the street - не очень красивое выражение. лучше сказать in the open air / out. 
family traditions are very fond of - не особо понятно
people (because) of their peace-loving

А в остальном все прекрасно!