Проверьте доклад! не надо писать, что у меня все правильно, потому что я уверенна что есть ошибки и такие ответы буду удалять! нужно написать в формальном стиле)и еще: через переводчик я и сама в состоянии проверить! . introductions.the aim of this report is to suggest ways to improve the flats in which we live, to make them safer and more pleasant to live in. 2.security.there is a risk that we would steal in their owapartments. therefore, it would be advisable to install surveillance camras in the corridors and hallways. i am sure that be common efforts we will be able to collect the necessary funds to purchase them. 3.fucilities. firstly, i would strongly recommended to equip every room, internet, so students can easily find the necessary information. secondly, it wouldbe nice to allocate a room for living room, so we could go there and relax after a hard day, communicating with each other and plaing board games. in addition, you can buy in every room, a small writing table. 4.general environment. unfortunately our rooms are badly lit and they already been overhaul. the wall should be painted ceiling whitewashed, you can hand a new chandelier with multiple light. another proposal put more pots of flowers on the window-sills, so they were eye. 5.conclusion. overall, i believe that many will support me. i think that together we can make our room safer and more pleasant to stay.
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Another proposal to put more pots of flowers on the window sill so that they will be visible- Another proposal put more pots of flowers on the window-sills, so they were eye.
Conclusion. Overall, I believe that many people will support me. I think that together we can make our room safer and more pleasant to stay.
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