В целом все хорошо, но есть небольшие придирки, которые бы лично я исправил.
При перечислении одежды в начале, крайне неуместно написано слово balaclavas(балаклава(тканевая маска с прорезами для рта и глаз)). Я так понял, что хотелось написать про капюшон или толстовку¿ Если да, то гораздо лучше будет написать hood. Вообщем балаклава точно отпадает
И еще, может быть, я бы исправил на my mom PREFER to wear. В таких предложениях всегда лучше ставить именно prefer (предпочитать)
И,да,как было написано ниже, все зависит от требования задания и указания времени, в котором нужно писать текст.
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Объяснение:
Ann couldn't imagine Tom had done it.
Tom said he hadn't thought about it. He just had done it.
Ann asked if Tom had been alone and why he had done it.
Tom said he hadn't been alone. There had been a lot of people. They had been watching him. He was fond of it. He said he was going to jump the next time. He asked if Ann wanted to come with him. Ann didn't think so/wanted to reject the suggestion. She was afraid.
Tom told Ann not to be silly. He would show her what to do. Ann said (OK) she would think about it.
We are going to make a reservation.
They are going to have breakfast in their room.
I am going to hand the supper order to the waiter.
A bell-boy is going to take suitcases to the third floor.
They are going to fill in the order for the laundry.