My family is large. There are 6 of us: father, mother, my sister, two brothers and me. My family is friendly and loving.
My father’s name is …. He is clever and kind. He is a doctor by profession.
My mother’s name is …. She is busy and loving. She doesn’t work. She is a housewife.
My elder sister’s name is … She is a very beautiful girl. Her hobby is singing.
My younger brother’s name is … He is very active. He likes sport.
My hobby is drawing. I like to draw in my free time. Also I like reading books. My favourite writer is …
At the weekends all the members of our family spend time together. We go for a walk, visit museums, go to the cinema or to the theatre.
I love my family very much.
Past Continuous употребляется
когда два действия происходят одновременно в я писала письмо, а мой папа смотрел телевизор)
когда одно действие было прервано другим (он смотрел телевизор, когда зазвонил телефон, или как в вашем случае - когда пришел папа, я ужинал)
Past Perfect употребляется, когда одно действие произошло раньше другого (когда мы приехали на вокзал, поезд уже ушел - "поезд ушел" - Past Perfect, "мы приехали" - Past Simple