Исправте ошибки . i get up at 11 o'clock. i wash my face, and i'm eating delicious pancakes for breakfast. during the day i'm listening to music, talking on the phone with her friends. during the day i watch movies, read books and eat much. in the evening i cook dinner and go for a walk with my friends. we go to the movies, in the cafe and enjoy the day. at eight o'clock i go home, have dinner, and watch movies. and i go to bed at two.
I get up at 11 o'clock.
I wash my face, and have some delicious pancakes for breakfast.
During the day I listen to music, talk on the phone with my friends, watch movies, read books and eat much.
In the evening I cook dinner and go for a walk with my friends. We go to the movies, have a fun in the cafe and enjoy each other.
At eight o'clock I go home, have dinner, and watch TV. (а то слишком много movies в тексте)
And I go to bed about two o'clock.