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Проверьте сочинение на языке. если есть ошибки, исправить ) i'm keen on k pop . it's my favorite music right now, but i also listen to other styles of music. i like to k- pop because it's a rhythmic and melodic style of music. from which you want to dance. but there is music that annoys me. for example i do not really like hard rock and heavy metal . it sounds horrible. i fond of classical and jass music. when i listen this music i relaxing . it's expressive still music. i also like rap. but it does not to be russian. there are different songs in this style. i do not like rude rap. but when it is in the ass music it sounds great. i hate punk because it's depressive and stupid. but this is my opinion. many people like exactly what i hate

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