Question

Да. ., написать эссе по языку для 7 класса (200-250 слов) на тему "вред и польза гаджетов". в эссе должно быть вступление, основная часть(три абзаца - два в пользу, один в не пользу гаджетов) и заключение. если можно, то , используйте в основной части слова: my personal view is that… лично я считаю, что… in my experience… по своему опыту… in my opinion/judgment/view… с моей точки зрения… hence… следовательно… in fact,… фактически, \по сути,\ в сущности… to be more precise… точнее говоря… for example/ for instance… например… i’d like to support my point of view with an example… мне бы хотелось подкрепить мою точку зрения примером… to begin with… начнем с того, что… the thing that needs to be said… первое, с чего нужно начать, это… on the one hand/on the other hand… с одной стороны\ с другой стороны moreover… более того… besides… кроме того… furthermore… кроме того… nevertheless… тем не менее… all the same… так или иначе, тем не менее… experts say that… эксперты считают, что… many people attach too much importance to… многие люди слишком большое значение… one reason why this approach may (not) work is that… одной из причин того, почему данный подход не работает (работает)… first of all/secondly/ thirdly/ finally… во-первых,\ во- вторых,\ втретьих\ в конечном итоге… there is a simple reason for this… этому есть простая причина… people should not remain indifferent to this problem… люди не должны оставаться безразличными к данной проблеме…. on the contrary, if all of us join our efforts we can change the world for the better… напротив, если все мы объединим усилия, то сможем изменить мир к лучшему… personally, i strongly object to this statement… лично я категорически против данного утверждения… i completely disagree with this statement… я полностью не согласна с данным утверждением… a whole number of key-issues arise from this statement. for instance… данное утверждение затрагивает массу ключевых вопросов. nevertheless, let us consider this problem from another angle… тем не менее, давайте рассмотрим эту проблему с другой стороны… there would se em to be clear pros and cons to both options… в обоих случаях есть очевидные преимущества и недостатки… as far as i’m conce rned… что касается меня… but personally, i include more to the opinion of… но лично я больше склоняюсь к мнению… for every complicated problem there is a simple solution… у любой самой запутанной проблемы есть простое решение… there is a great deal of truth in what they say… в их словах есть доля правды…

Answer 1

Technology is now a big part of our society and our foreseeable future. There is little room for people that wish to live without technology, and luckily, it is still advancing at a rate that has helped stave off stagnation. Here I analyze the advantages and disadvantages of technology. I personally would want a developed world with advanced technologies. The following are the reasons why I do want a more advanced world with advanced technologies. My major reason is because when you have advanced technologies, life is much easier as robots and machines would take over your daily life chores. With robots and machines doing one’s chores one has time to relax. Another reason is because unlike humans, robots and machines do not make mistakes when programmed correctly. They always accomplish tasks perfectly so you won’t have to worry about making a mistake and getting trouble. Other reasons why I want advanced technologies are because they save a great deal of time and money. As there are so many advantages from highly developed technology, there also is a great deal of disadvantages from them. One disadvantage is that as technology develops, robots and machines will take over many jobs and people will loose their jobs by contrast. As people loose their jobs, they will have hard time getting money which would make it hard for them to continue to meet living expenses. Moreover, as people use less money the economy would be difficult to control, the problem will influence the world greatly. Another disadvantage of highly developed technology is that machines and robots are complex. It is hard to activate all the machines you have unless you can multitask. Technology is a good thing, but  that with each technological element we gain disadvantages as well as advantages, and many times those disadvantages are overlooked by technology users.