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my friend and i met at a music school when i was about 10. she came to my teacher's class, although that i didn’t communicate with her for the first year and a half, because our piano lessons didn’t overlap. the first time we started chatting in solfeggio when i was eleven. i didn't like solfeggio, didn't do my homework and didn't know the theory well enough, so when there were any test works i sat down with her because she was one of the best solfeggio theorist. after i began to sit with her regularly, and not just on tests. over time, while i was sitting with her, we found many common interests and hobbies, for example, drawing. i was an amateur artist and varya went to a art school, so we very quickly found a common language. over time, our lessons shifted and we began to play in the ensemble, which united us even more, so even after i left school we did not stop communicating.
вы имели обсуждения в классе о влиянии технологий на общество. теперь ваш учитель попросил вас написать эссе давая ваше мнение на тему. ваше эссе примерно в 180-200 слов.
tidy your room" said his mother.