Отличное сочинение! Но есть некоторые недочеты. Я бы сказала так : When I ASK my mother would she like to work in another place, for example desk job, she answers no. (либо when i askEDshe answerED) Mom said she loves her job, especially bake sweets. В этом предложении тоже надо выбрать одно время, я бы сказала так: Mom SAYS, she loves her job, especially TO bake sweets И последнее - So at home I always plenty of goodies. Тут пропущен глагол, я бы сказала так: So at home I always HAVE plenty of goodies.
your trousers are in the wardrobe
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where are my gloves
this information is correct
his hair is brown
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his accommondation is luxurious
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my glasses are on the table
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