Question

Однажды холодным зимним вечером некая шестнадцатилетняя девушка была дома одна и смотрела телевизор. ее родители уехали на праздник к друзьям. весь день шёл густой снег, но девушка чувствовала себя хорошо и уютно, сидя на диване в гостиной, свернувшись в теплое шерстяное одеяло. к полуночи родители еще не вернулись, и она стала чувствовать себя тревожно. звонить им она не хотела, чтобы они не подумали, будто она не может сама о себе позаботиться. телевизор стоял в углу комнаты рядом с большим окном. она смотрела очередной фильм, когда вдруг краем глаза заметила, как что-то движется в окне. в темноте среди снега она различила фигуру мужчины, идущего в её сторону. когда он приблизился, она смогла разглядеть его лицо. оно было покрыто шрамами, а губы были растянуты в зловещей улыбке. испугавшись, девушка замерла, не смея зашевелиться. человек так и стоял и молча смотрел на неё через стекло. затем он вдруг сунул руку в карман пальто и что-то вытащил. это был перевели те на язык

Answer 1

One cold winter evening, some sixteen-year girl was home alone and watching TV. Her parents had gone on holiday to friends. all day went thick snow, but she felt good and comfortable sitting on the couch in the living room, curled up in a warm blanket. By midnight, the parents have not yet returned, and she began to feel anxious. Call them she did not want to they do not think that it can not take care of herself. 
TV was in the corner next to a large window. She watched another movie, when suddenly the corner of my eye noticed how something moves in the window. In the darkness of the falling snow, it distinguished the figure of a man walking toward her. As he approached, she could see his face. It was covered with scars and his lips were stretched into a sinister smile. Frightened, she froze, not daring stirred. The man just stood there and stared at her through the glass. Then he suddenly put his hand in his coat pocket and pulled out something. It was a knife .

Answer 2

Once in the cold winter evening a certain sixteen-year-old girl was at home one and watched TV. Her parents left for a holiday to friends. All daythere was a dense snow, but the girl felt well and comfortably, sitting on a sofa in a drawing room, having curled up in a warm woolen blanket. By midnight parents didn't return yet, and she began to feel is disturbing. She didn't want to call them that they didn't think as if she can't take care of herself. 
The TV stood in a room corner near a big window. She watched the next movie when suddenly out of the corner of the eye I noticed how something moves in a window. In the dark among the falling snow she distinguished a figure of the man going to its party. When it came nearer, she could make out his face. It was covered with scars, and lips were stretched in an ominous smile. Having been frightened, the girl stood, without daring to begin to move. The person and stood and silently looked at it through glass. Then he suddenly put a hand in a coat pocket and something pulled out. It was the knife