Question

Writing (formal letter) you`ve been visiting a british newspaper`s website.you want to find out some information about travel in britain bat you are not satisfied with the quality of the website information 1) introduce yourself write how often and why you visit the site 2)explain what you don`t like about the site 3)suggest some interesting solutions 4)express your hope that your suggestions will be used on the new website

Answer 1

Hello, my name is Diana, I came to this newspaper-site because I wanted to read the latest news. But I didn't like the quality of that news paper. News on this newspaper wasn't really authentic. There was only gossips. The photos on that newspaper was kinda photoshopped. newspaper shoul be with real news/ not like hwo yellow press does. It should have a nice pictures and a nice site design. When web-news has a poor site design it can make a bad reaction to reader. So my suggestion to Chief Editor is to write only credible news and facts, not only stupid gossips about something. I hope that you will see my review and you will try to improve you web-newspaper.
Best wishes
Diana