Question

Проверте ,нет ли тут ошибок? ? i'm writing for you to get the work in the camp. i would like to work as the organizator's assistant. i don't have a lot of experience in this sphere, but i like to work with children. about myself: i'm 17, i study at the 11th form. earlier i got lessons at the theater studio. i am fond of sports and sport games. i know a lot of interesting games and activities. i read a lot, so i know what to talk about with different people, i can communicate in any theme. i lead the healthy way of life, like animals and nature. i know english. active, hardworking, like children very much. i like to help them. responsible, communicative. i find the common theme with everyone. i would be wery thankful, if you would get me and would write me the response.

Answer 1

I'm writing to you to get a job in the camp. I would like to work as an organizator's assistant (??? что за должность?). I don't have a lot of experience in this sphere, but I like to work with children. 
About myself:
I'm 17, I study at the 11th form. Earlier I got lessons at the theater studio. I am fond of sports and sport games. I know a lot of interesting games and activities. I read a lot, so I know what to talk about with different people, I can communicate on any theme. I lead healthy way of life, love animals and nature. I speak English.  I am an active and  a hardworking person. I like children and like to help them. I am responsible, communicative and can find a common language with everyone. 
I would be very thankful, if you give me the job, and write me the response.

Answer 2

I'm writing for you,