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Много проверьте и исправьте ошибки: my name is marina demchenko. i am 15 years old. i live my whole life in kharkov. i, my mother, father, grandfather and uncle live in a high-rise building of one of the sleeping areas of the city. just us lives a cat alaska, which is 1 year old soon. for several years i have been fond of drawing and i like it very much. i love to read novels, it's my favorite genre in literature. i like to watch comedy and melodrama, but unfortunately, due to lack of time, i do it very often. i am a low and thin girl. i have straight brown hair medium length hair and brown eyes. i do not have a particular style of dress, i wear what i like. if we talk about the qualities of character, i can say that i am sensitive and impressionable, so bring me to tears very easily. i'm pretty responsible and always try to bring the case to the end. i can call myself an ambitious and hard-working man. i can not call myself a very sociable, but also a closed call can not either. i have a few friends with whom i communicate well. together we are learning in school. i hope that we will continue to continue to be friends. i'm in the 10th grade. our school is not very big, there is to learn about 600 people. at the moment, i do not have a favorite subject, and teachers, for me anyway. i try to study well, participate in competitions and tournaments.while i have not decided what i want to be in the future, but i think that this will involve the design and advertising. you should know that i can be an emotional and sometimes whimsical.

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My name is Marina Demchenko. I am 15 years old. I was born in Kharkov and I have been living here all my life.  My mum, dad, grandpa, (my uncle) and I live in a high building in one of sleeping areas of the city. We’ve got a cat, called Alaska. It is only some months old.

 For several years I have been fond of drawing and I like it very much. I love to read novels; it's my favourite genre in literature. I like to watch funny comedies as well as melodramas, but unfortunately, due to lack of time, I can’t (=don’t) do it often. As for my appearance,

 I am thin and short. I have straight brown medium length hair and bright brown eyes. I don’t keep to some particular dress style, but I wear just what I like every other time. As for my traits of character, I think I am very sensitive; I take everything close to my heart.  I can be very emotional but sometimes even whimsical.

I'm pretty responsible and always try to do all the things up to the end. I can say about myself that I’m an ambitious and hard-working person. I am not very sociable, but I’m not quiet either.  I have a few friends with whom I communicate well. Together we all are learning at the same school. I hope that we will continue to be good friends after finishing school.  Now I'm in the 10th grade. (= in grade 10). Our school is not very small, there are about 600 students in it.  At the moment, I do not have any favourite subjects.(or teachers). I try to study well, participate in different competitions and tournaments.    To conclude, I have not decided what I am going to become in the future, so far, but I think it’ll be something connected with design or advertising.