Yesterday at 7 o'clock in the evening two small children were skating on the lake. They were dancing on the ice. It was very beautiful. The ice was very thick! I was very dangerous to skate there! One of two children Kate fell into the water. She started to sink. The other girl named Julia was very small and she was afraid, but she started to help. She laid on the ice, took off her scarf and started to pull her. When they were both on the ice. Julia took of her coat, gave it to Kate and they ran home. Now they are good. Julia is a hero, she has done everything she сould help her friend.
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