If a factory is built in my hometown, there will be many advantages. First, there will be MUCH more employment. Second, roads will be BETTER and transportation will be FASTER. There will also be MORE educational and recreational facilities. Unfortunately, there will also be some disadvantages. The town will not be AS peaceful as before and it will be MUCH more polluted. FAR more people will come to work here. The town will probably become more crowded and there will be FEWER parks and trees. On the whole, however, I feel that there are more advantages than disadvantages and i would support this plan.
If a factory is built in my hometown, there will be many advantages. First, there will be (1)much more employment. Second, roads will be (2)better and transportation will be (3)faster. There will also be (4)many more educational and recreational facilities. Unfortunately, there will also be some disadvantages. The town will not be as peaceful as before and it will be (6)much more polluted. (5)Many more people will come to work here. The town will probably become more crowded and there will be less parks and trees. On the whole, however, I feel that there are more advantages than disadvantages and I would support this plan.
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