You have received a letter from your English-speaking pen friend Ed. …Tomorrow is my mother’s birthday. My father and I always arganise a kind of surprise party for her birthday. Today we have to do many things about the house.
Thank you so much for your email. What an amazing news! Forward my warm regards to your mom! I wish I could be there to help you out with all of the preparation.
My family has the tradition of organizing surprise parties as well, which I think is pretty amazing. Last year we had done gorgeous tea party for my mom's birthday. But usually it is as simple as typical "surprise" from behind the sofa!
Among all tasks that we have during party preparation are the ones connected to cleaning up, buying cool decorations and ordering a big cake! I personally in love with cakes done by old woman Mary from New Avenue Street. She is amazing sweet old lady, I have never tasted something better then her apple pie filling! Maybe you will consider her baking skills for your party?
As for the people invited, we try to keep it simple with as less people as possible. We prefer to celebrate with a small circle of relatives. What about you?
Please, let me know how your party will go! I am excited to hear back from you.
When I was almost 1 year old - в ед. числе. В этом же предложении, если уж "мои родители говоряТ", тогда "My parents say". Далее, здесь же, не думаю что надо использовать продолженное. либо так если используем when, My parents say that when I was almost 1 year old when they gave me pencils and paper for drawing, I was banging rhytm of the music which I heard lately. либо так, если не используем: My parents say that when I was almost 1 year old they gave me pencils and paper for drawing but I banged rhytm of the music which I heard lately. Because of it - лучше That's why. I like it because I can do it very well anyway my teachers say it. Это лучше разделить на 2: I like it because I can do it very well. At least my teachers say it.
All countries have conventional but important behaviour rules that could be explained by inhabitants only. So, you've come to Russia but you haven't know about these rules yet. I'll help you learn primary of them. Firstly,russuians usually cede pleces to aged people in the bus. We take care about our elderly. This rule should be known to you,for sure. Secondly,russians usualy take off their footwear before entering the house. Perhaps,it could seems rather strange. But this is russian behaviour rule. Thirdly, we usualy say "enjoy your meals" to each other before dinner,supper. It's not typical for your country,isn't it? Also,when russians have a meet they can kiss each other. We don't open gifts out of hand,which was presented to us. There are many another rules. But, we have to remember foreigners don't aware about all our rules and as long as you staying friendly and polite don't worry about your a little bit strange behaviour. Вот исправленный вариант.
Hi Ed!
Thank you so much for your email. What an amazing news! Forward my warm regards to your mom! I wish I could be there to help you out with all of the preparation.
My family has the tradition of organizing surprise parties as well, which I think is pretty amazing. Last year we had done gorgeous tea party for my mom's birthday. But usually it is as simple as typical "surprise" from behind the sofa!
Among all tasks that we have during party preparation are the ones connected to cleaning up, buying cool decorations and ordering a big cake! I personally in love with cakes done by old woman Mary from New Avenue Street. She is amazing sweet old lady, I have never tasted something better then her apple pie filling! Maybe you will consider her baking skills for your party?
As for the people invited, we try to keep it simple with as less people as possible. We prefer to celebrate with a small circle of relatives. What about you?
Please, let me know how your party will go! I am excited to hear back from you.
Looking forward to hearing from you!
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