The first frosts come - the first frost comes( Я бы лучше сказала, The frost is getting harder). Also good weather- still good weather. It's a little rain= it is raining a little, start to sing - start singing, it becomes hot - it's getting hotter, the weather is colder = the weather is colder than in July , rains are coming = it's starting raining. По-моему мнению, лучше так!) А у тебя очень даже не плохо :) Просто тут перевод русский. Иностранцы не говорят так, как мы говорим) там разные выражение и порядок слов!) Отлично, удачи ;)
To start with I like all which I have in my school. But the most thing which I love is probably is dining room. Why I love it? Because we have tasty dessert, candies and ice cream. In my opinin this is paradise for every student. Generally we have difficult days everyday but I think the nost difficult day in weekday is Wednesday. Because I have seven lessons aslo which I do not love. Since when I have gone to school only one thing I would like to change is uniform. Because our uniform is too boring.